You're a damn good writer when you can make your reader "feel" your words....
Ness
· 9 months ago
I know right...it's like you can almost see it unfolding right in front of your eyes...and then you picture urself & ur boo in that situation...lol
BlogXilla
· 9 months ago
stop fcking lying you know you thinking about me and you in that situation!!! lol
Ness
· 9 months ago
U caught me red handed Xilla....I can't pull the wool over your eyes lmao.......hahahahahahaha
sike lol
outofyourmind
· 9 months ago
I love to be told "Shut up and take the dick"....*sigh* Nice story, you're really good.
SugarTits
· 9 months ago
GOT-DAMN!!!!!
yes
· 9 months ago
ooo wee!!
Streetz
· 9 months ago
Im still laughing at Manxilla... this is a great story. Very vivid
MsLizziA
· 9 months ago
I saw this whole thing happening before my eyes
Deez Nutz
· 9 months ago
That was some good as fiction
Kaici
· 9 months ago
Mhmmm...your visual your words create is beautiful. Love it.
INCA
· 9 months ago
I LOVE THIS STORY! IT SOUNDS VERY EXCITING!!!!!!!!!!!
SaTownHoney
· 9 months ago
wow! what clubs do u go to? that sounds like a better time than i've ever had in a club lol
lovely_dimples
· 4 months ago
lol at Love in DC?
Megan Taylor
· 1 month ago
Lol oh Xilla you are so SNEAKY!! I love it!! LOL I never read dis one b4 but I do like it... AND IM SO SHOCKED!! I saw your pic above with da chic on bed with sumone on top of her wit da froggy over they face, I saw da pic on Bossip I believe!!!! I DDINT KNO DAT WAS ANOTHA CHIC ON TOP OF HER!! AND A STUD AT DAT!! Oh dat shit turned me on XILLA!! why you do dis to me at wrk!!!
sike lol
Nice story, you're really good.