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Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

DaKing — Mon, 23 Feb 2009 17:16:14 -0000

it definitely was a good story. moved a little to fast, but i guess that's the speed it had to go to be a short story. i think if you build the characters a lil'more and maybe give more insight to all these different relationships, you'll have a hit. maybe even a straight to dvd movie script on your hands. good job.

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

DomiMami — Mon, 23 Feb 2009 12:55:29 -0000

Dope.
Id like to read in the sequel how Jazzy and Tasha fucked the shit outta eachother....
That would be the best sequel imagination could unearth.
And...and...and.... maybe they can freeze the biggest dick from the two brothers and use it later. LMAO....I KID. (ok, well....Only halfway kidding)
Keep up the good work Xilla

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Haniplease — Mon, 23 Feb 2009 01:57:25 -0000

this was DOPE! keep 'em comin blogsta! OW!

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Britt Bri — Sun, 22 Feb 2009 22:26:08 -0000

FROM THE DESK OF A BOOKWORM?

THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VERY DETAILED...BUT YOU DEFINITELY LEFT THE AUDIENCE WANTING MORE... THIS WOULD BE A GREAT ENDING TO BUILD A SEQUEL OFF OF!

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Niced — Sat, 21 Feb 2009 22:08:43 -0000

My heart is still beating fast!!! U need to finish the story, so did the girl survive? Did her and Tasha hook up?

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

bfount — Sat, 21 Feb 2009 16:56:42 -0000

I am definitely not a fan of the "to be continued...", so please don't leave one of your biggest fans hanging. I hope there wil be more, and I can't wait to see what else you have in store. I have always been an avid reader, but never one to comment, but today I was compelled to send my love. I can't wait to see what's next....

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Breezy — Sat, 21 Feb 2009 12:32:06 -0000

Wow! Definitely did not see that ending coming. Thats a dope story Xilla..
you are really big on details and are hella graphic!
... a lot of dudes love watching two women but can't take it when one of them is their girl..

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

DaRuler — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 21:14:00 -0000

the story was coo, but why the two brothers?! why it couldn't have been one of the females?? in the end though, it was aiight... who the hell is ol' girl for your cover story though??? she bad...

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

ias — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 19:22:14 -0000

intense i like it =]

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

lisa — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 19:21:37 -0000

well, i never leave comments and i enjoyed your story so much I had to change up my routine and let you know how much i appreciate it. and i would LOVE a xilla book, i might even pre-order it on amazon.

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

sexyma078 — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 19:12:35 -0000

Great Start Xilla get to work on your novel Boy!!

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

HeadMistress — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 18:28:11 -0000

Yeah, yeah, yeah - nice try...give a girl a chance to get home from work...LOL

Loved It!!! (in my best Damon Wayans/David Allen Grier "Men on Film" voices)

Soooooooooo when do we get the next 11 pages and what about the "to be continued" of the last Cinderella Story???

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

KueenluvlyA — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 17:05:19 -0000

i fucking LOVE it...omg that shit was fire....you have to have to write a book..i want a signed copy....it was amazing...didn't know what was coming but damn it was hot xilla....good job!!! :)

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Shaunda — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 16:55:50 -0000

That was great!!! I loved it!!

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

Jasmine_Fern — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 15:46:58 -0000

Thank You!!! People will comment just give them a chance to get over the shock! Lol I am the one who was lookin 4 the rest of it. And It took me a while to comment.

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

BlogXilla — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 14:35:45 -0000

Thanks Lisa, but this is why I won't write a book... All the people who requested it... no one says anything!! lol I guess i helped myself out!

Re: BlogXilla Presents: “It’s Going Down” A Short Story

lisa — Fri, 20 Feb 2009 13:51:29 -0000

damn, that's crazy. a good start,for sure. i was actually eating cheese grits, turkey bacon, and scrambled eggs when i read that part. i had a biscuit too tho. anyway, keep up the good work, love he site!